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The heads - sporting half-lidded, bloodshot eyes - shoot out with each smack of the plastic hands ("gimme five").
Fill your belly with granola (edamame, 'ludes, M&Ms, whatever) before the rest of the co-op gets theirs.
The whole thing doubles as a hookah, with a removable dome over the playing
field and water tray underneath.
Duuuude.
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You're mixing your cultures a bit... okay, lots. |
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I like, but it could be more evocative. If the 'arena' area was covered in a glass bubble which you had to fill with smoke before the contest begins then I could be persuaded to croissantage. You'll have to move fast though as I'm feeling a bit peckish at the moment. |
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For "I'm feeling a bit peckish at the moment" +. |
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For the idea..., well, I'm feeling a bit like a pecker, so
neutral. |
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You get my vote for the title alone. |
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"If the 'arena' area was covered in a glass bubble which you had to fill with smoke before the contest begins then I could be persuaded to croissantage."
Idea edited appropriately. |
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//You get my vote for the title alone// |
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This is clearly one of those ideas that exists only to justify the title. I still like it, mind. |
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//Idea edited appropriately.//
Mwuhhahahaha. Fooled you! I'd already croissanted so you didn't need to change the idea at all! |
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