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Haiku week
Dedicate one week/Posts are or contain Haiku/It will be perfect | |
My first thought was to
Dedicate A Haiku Day
But the time is past
The fifth of July
The year two thousand and five
Would have been ideal
< 5/7/5 >
Although to you yanks
sadly the seventh of May
Would have had to do.
So I say we just
Name
a week, <and shame the weak>
So, what do you say?
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Who wrote his thoughts in haiku |
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Please, please, please, please, no.
Please, please, please, please, please, please, no.
Please, please, please, please, no. |
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a haiku is sup-
posed to be 5 7 5 syl-
lables but some people cheat |
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//so no then?//
No, no now! |
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//Please, please, please, please, no//
Includes no reference to
Seasons, but this does.
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Does 5/7/5 give
.14 or 3.5?
Does anyone care? |
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This shouldn't be a halfbakery thing. This should be an international holiday. |
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English too compact.
five-seven-five syllables:
it is too verbose.
I prefer the spirit of the Japanese way. The spirit of haiku is to force the author to use only the really important parts of what he has to say. The above haiku would be properly written (despite syllable count)
English compact
consider carefully.
use few words.
haiku no seishin
daijin no koto dake
tskatta ho ga ii |
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boku amari
dekinaikedo shitai
ii haiku tsukuru |
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10 PRINT "HELLO WORLD"
25 GOTO 30
30 GOTO 10 |
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To be more widely practiced. |
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This is called "let's all". |
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read the f.a.q's
quite obviously a list
[marked-for-deletion] |
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I did not intend
for people to make a list
read the idea
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