Halfbakery: Poetry
A poor life this   (+18, -1)  [vote for, against]

What is this life if, lacking wit
We halfbake slipshod, feeble shit
Bad spelling and worse punctuation
Tangled, garbled explanation
Rambling sci-fi plagiarisms
Magic, GM-organisms
Uninspired and overwrought
We foist each scant, substandard thought
On unexpecting 'bakers, then
WE DO THE WHOLE THING ONCE AGAIN!
The best inventions we can muster
Are, in a nutshell, lacking lustre
A poor life this if, dull indeed
We constantly get M.F.D'd
-- squeak, Jun 01 2006

William Henry Davies: "Leisure" http://www.blupete..../Poetry/Leisure.htm
The original. [jutta, Jun 02 2006]

::::Applause::::

Bravo, bravo!
-- dbmag9, Jun 01 2006


To paraphrase [Jutta], " where have all the sane people gone, and which way is the exit? "
-- normzone, Jun 01 2006


[norm]All the sane people obviously found the exit!
-- squeak, Jun 02 2006


*snaps fingers*
-- Letsbuildafort, Jun 02 2006


Top stuff, squeak.
-- lostdog, Jun 02 2006


Lovely work.
-- hidden truths, Jun 03 2006



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